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1Artemis Ruhe 

Artemis Ruhe
2nd Division Captain

Wed Sep 25, 2013 12:44 pm
Shikai:
Bankai:
Zanjutsu:
Bakudo:
Hoho:



Last edited by Artemis Ruhe on Wed Oct 16, 2013 3:55 am; edited 3 times in total

2Tetsu Nara 

Tetsu Nara

Thu Sep 26, 2013 11:50 am
First, your shikai's power is supposed to be what it can innately do, like a passive ability or the like(I suggest looking at other people's to get an idea). It isn't a summary of what it's power covers.

Second, your technique: pick one technique level. You can't have a single one scale, either in it's own rank, or based on your skill's ranks. And 1 defense technique can block 1 attack technique of equal rank, not two. Also if it blocks equal to it's own rank, that is what it does, it does not also get to hide you.

3Ashland Irisaki 

Ashland Irisaki
12th Division Captain

Thu Sep 26, 2013 11:59 am

4Artemis Ruhe 

Artemis Ruhe
2nd Division Captain

Wed Oct 16, 2013 3:42 am
Bump!

5Ashland Irisaki 

Ashland Irisaki
12th Division Captain

Wed Oct 16, 2013 10:33 am
Skills guide:

First Your Shikai passive of the +1 to Weaponry is allowed. However looking over some of your techniques there are a few things I would like to see changed as per the scale posted above.

Yoru no manto (Cloak of Night) need to be adjusted to follow the scale.

Yakan-mai (Night Sheet ~ 夜間枚) No. If you use a technique or attack you reveal yourself. Even if just a little. Also follow the tier guidlines for detection levels from the link provided at the top.

Koi ha kōshō (Dark Blade Arsenal ~ 濃い刃工廠) Needs to have a max limit to the amount of blades created. For instance if you shattered the shadow of a building. reasonable limits need to be set.


Your Bankai~ Negatory captain. While turning into a shadow is fine you will still follow the tier rules. If they can detect you. They can damage you. This whole business with having to match your bond is a no go. It will remain technique versus technique as in the link above. Please edit this. On another note stabbing the shadow is fine.

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