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on Sun Oct 20, 2013 8:47 am
Ferocidad Del Dragon:
Primera Etapa Release Command: "Fly, Ferocidad del Dragón"
Primera Etapa Appearance: Upon release of her Primera Etapa, Lastrada reverts back largely to what she looked like when she was a Vasto Lorde. Her height remains the same tiny 5'8" but her body becomes covered in the same, white substance that makes up the hollow mask. The white armor if covered in a scale design, giving Lastrada a reptile look. Lastrada's mask also returns and just like when she was before she removed it, it wrapped around her entire head and had no opening for a mouth, a sign of her evolution beyond the need to devour other hollow.

Each one of Lastrada's fingers would have 4 inch claws upon them and her feet would also be covered in 3 inch talons. Upon Lastrada's back would be two, large and retractable wings which have a total wing span of seven feet.

Primera Etapa Powers: Lastrada's entire body basically becomes a weapon, being able to attack with her claws, talons or wings, being able to use them all to preform Arte de la Espada techniques. She now can charge a cero from the re-completed three horns on her head (since she can't use her mouth in this form) and all Arte de la Espada based techniques are treated as +1 tier higher including basic attacks with her claws/talons which all basically become Lastrada's swords in this form.

Primera Etapa Abilities:

Name: Alcance del Dragón
Type: Offense| Arte de la Espada
Rank: Master
Range: 0-30 meters
Duration: One post
Cooldown: 5 post
Description: Lastrada's claws become encased in a thick layer of Reiryoku and upon the next swing of her claws the Reiryoku is released in four arcs which stream from the tips of her fingers, going out to 20 meters in total and slicing through anything it touches along the way (Correct defensive techniques non-withstanding.) Since the Reiryoku covers both of Lastrada's claws, she has two strikes with this skill but must use them both within the same post.

Name: Muerte desde arriba
Type: Offense| Arte de la Espada | Sonido
Rank: Master
Range: 0-15 meters
Duration: One post
Cooldown: 4 post
Description: Lastrada flies into the air using her wings, finds a target and gets her claws at the ready. This attack, despite it's name can actually from any angle rather it be directly above them or not. The attack is preformed by combining sonido with her flight to propel her forward at tremendous speeds, allowing her to strike her enemy in passing with Reiryoku  laced claws which generate enough force to send them flying a good 15 meters or even ripping through them like paper if they don't have the defenses to deal with the attack. Since this technique uses the properties of Sonido, the user is required to have at least Adept in Sonido to use this skill.

Name: Retroceso del dragón
Type: Offense | Arte de la Espada
Rank: Grandmaster
Range: 0-20 meters
Duration: One post
Cooldown: 6
Description: Lastrada covers both talons upon her feet in Reiryoku, allowing a drastic increase to her physical power as she then spins upon either her right or left foot (whatever makes sense at the time) sending the free foot in a kick which allows her talons to slash at a chosen location upon the enemies body. The kick releases the Reiryoku stored up in her talons which manifest in a frenzy of small blades which fly out towards the target. The blades are rather small, each being about 10 centermeters wide and thick, with the total number of blades compressed and released from the talons numbering twenty. The blades can rip enemies to shreds along with generating enough force to carry the enemy a good 10-15 meters backwards assuming they don't recover themselves.

Name: Onda de choque feroz de rabia
Type: Offense | Arte de la Espada
Rank: Grandmaster
Range: 0-15 meters
Duration: One post
Cooldown: 6
Description: Summoning every ounce of strength within her body Lastrada swings her claws down and into the ground. The impact will be so forceful not only will the ground sink eight feet down in a ten meter radius it will send out an AoE shockwave made up of Lastrada's spiritual pressure which can basically cut through anything that it touches, correct defenses used aside. As the range says...it has a 15 meter radius.

Segunda Etapa:
Segunda Etapa Release Command: "Báñese en la sangre"
Segunda Etapa Appearance: Upon releasing her rarely seen Segunda Etapa the first thing which happens is her reiatsu explodes and disperses, doing as the command suggest and showers the area around Lastrada in blood. Soon after this blood like reiatsu flows over to and clinks to Lastrada's body which starts the physical changes in Segunda Etapa. The entirely white armor will now be a blood red color. The horns upon her head will grow and become twisted together forming a halo above her head. Lastrada's wings will grow out a bit more and will have what looks to be feathers upon them, giving them a more angelic (or demonic if your view sees it) look to them.

The talons on Lastrada's feet would remain the same, however her claws would gain an odd ability in this form. Lastrada can fuse them together to form a sword lance of sorts at any time she wishes or she could make them back into there simplistic claw form. The spiritual pressure Lastrada gives off in this form is very heavy and thick to the point it might confuse people at first to what they were sensing (Purely cosmetic..they figure out it's spiritual pressure pretty damn fast..). The last few details that change is lack of scales on her body now, replaced by smooth surface (albeit red with blood.) and on the center of her chest going down is a rather large cross that seems to have been burnt on.  Lastrada's mask is also completely blank in this state, not even having a place for her to see out of. She needs not her sight. She simply senses the area around her through touch, sound, smell..

Segunda Etapa Powers: The first power actually seems to be a disadvantage at first. With the lack of eye sight in this form, Lastrada uses her other enhanced senses to fight and move. However, in truth this gives her a much more full encompassing 360 degree vision range. This as a result gets rid of blind spots. The rest of her strengths are simply enhanced from her Primera etapa, most note worthy her brute strength and how anything to do with Arte de la Espada is treated as 2 tiers higher, including basic attacks with her wings, talons and claws which just like in her last form, count as Lastrada's swords.

Segunda Etapa Abilities:

Name: El juicio de Ángel
Type: Offense | Arte de la Espada
Rank: Transcender
Range: 0-40 meters
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 9 post
Description: Lastrada forms her claws together into the sword lance, the tip starting to glow with her reyshie. Rapidly she would start slashing the air in front of her, rather the enemy is in front of her or not and lines appear in the air, marked by Lastrada's strikes. At her command, all these fly forth up to 50 meters away and slice through anything that they touch, reducing them into bloody bits. Lastrada can make up to ten strikes with this attack and she does not need to send them out all at once either. She is free to shoot them off one after another.



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on Sun Oct 20, 2013 12:22 pm
Okay, that took awhile but that should cover ALL my freebie skills. :3

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on Mon Oct 21, 2013 6:00 pm
Freebies APPROVED

Your releases are still under discussion.

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on Wed Oct 23, 2013 5:58 pm
Muerte desde arriba ~I don't understand, maybe it is the wording of the sentence. Is it allowed to be used from any angle?

Onda de choque feroz de rabia~ You must describe how wide and large the AOE is.

Báñese en la sangre~ Is fine if you remove reaction speed. That is giving you a +1 to perception without saying it.

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on Wed Oct 23, 2013 6:24 pm
Alaric Herrman wrote: Muerte desde arriba ~I don't understand, maybe it is the wording of the sentence. Is it allowed to be used from any angle?

Retroceso del dragón ~ First off this does not follow the Teir system. If someone blocks it with the same level Technique it is just simply negated. Also how would on measure 20 meters push back. A general description of it would do better. Just to allow the other person to role play accordingly. A sentence as "The technique causes the person to fly back a great amount."

Onda de choque feroz de rabia~ When affecting another player you just need to make a general description, when the technique is an AOE as this you must describe how large the AOE is.

Báñese en la sangre~ Is fine if you remove reaction speed. That is giving you a +1 to perception without saying it.
Muerte~ That is exactly what the Spell says.."From any angle" The angle doesn't make the attack, the manor of the attack makes the attack. It's basically just a charge using the flight of her wings.

Retro~ You just told me it was fine...

Onda: Made the range more clear..

Banese en la sangre: Changed.

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on Wed Oct 23, 2013 6:33 pm
Lastrada Tova wrote:
Ferocidad Del Dragon:
Primera Etapa Release Command: "Fly, Ferocidad del Dragón"
Primera Etapa Appearance: Upon release of her Primera Etapa, Lastrada reverts back largely to what she looked like when she was a Vasto Lorde. Her height remains the same tiny 5'8" but her body becomes covered in the same, white substance that makes up the hollow mask. The white armor if covered in a scale design, giving Lastrada a reptile look. Lastrada's mask also returns and just like when she was before she removed it, it wrapped around her entire head and had no opening for a mouth, a sign of her evolution beyond the need to devour other hollow.

Each one of Lastrada's fingers would have 4 inch claws upon them and her feet would also be covered in 3 inch talons. Upon Lastrada's back would be two, large and retractable wings which have a total wing span of seven feet.

Primera Etapa Powers: Lastrada's entire body basically becomes a weapon, being able to attack with her claws, talons or wings, being able to use them all to preform Arte de la Espada techniques. She now can charge a cero from the re-completed three horns on her head (since she can't use her mouth in this form) and all Arte de la Espada based techniques are treated as +1 tier higher including basic attacks with her claws/talons which all basically become Lastrada's swords in this form.

Primera Etapa Abilities:

Name: Alcance del Dragón
Type: Offense| Arte de la Espada
Rank: Master
Range: 0-30 meters
Duration: One post
Cooldown: 5 post
Description: Lastrada's claws become encased in a thick layer of Reiryoku and upon the next swing of her claws the Reiryoku is released in four arcs which stream from the tips of her fingers, going out to 20 meters in total and slicing through anything it touches along the way (Correct defensive techniques non-withstanding.) Since the Reiryoku covers both of Lastrada's claws, she has two strikes with this skill but must use them both within the same post.

Name: Muerte desde arriba
Type: Offense| Arte de la Espada | Sonido
Rank: Master
Range: 0-15 meters
Duration: One post
Cooldown: 4 post
Description: Lastrada flies into the air using her wings, finds a target and gets her claws at the ready. This attack, despite it's name can actually from any angle rather it be directly above them or not. The attack is preformed by combining sonido with her flight to propel her forward at tremendous speeds, allowing her to strike her enemy in passing with Reiryoku  laced claws which generate enough force to send them flying a good 15 meters or even ripping through them like paper if they don't have the defenses to deal with the attack. Since this technique uses the properties of Sonido, the user is required to have at least Adept in Sonido to use this skill.

Name: Retroceso del dragón
Type: Offense | Arte de la Espada
Rank: Grandmaster
Range: 0-20 meters
Duration: One post
Cooldown: 6
Description: Lastrada covers both talons upon her feet in Reiryoku, allowing a drastic increase to her physical power as she then spins upon either her right or left foot (whatever makes sense at the time) sending the free foot in a kick which allows her talons to slash at a chosen location upon the enemies body. The kick releases the Reiryoku stored up in her talons which manifest in a frenzy of small blades which fly out towards the target. The blades are rather small, each being about 10 centermeters wide and thick, with the total number of blades compressed and released from the talons numbering twenty. The blades can rip enemies to shreds along with generating enough force to carry the enemy a good 10-15 meters backwards assuming they don't recover themselves.

Name: Onda de choque feroz de rabia
Type: Offense | Arte de la Espada
Rank: Grandmaster
Range: 0-15 meters
Duration: One post
Cooldown: 6
Description: Summoning every ounce of strength within her body Lastrada swings her claws down and into the ground. The impact will be so forceful not only will the ground sink eight feet down in a ten meter radius it will send out an AoE shockwave made up of Lastrada's spiritual pressure which can basically cut through anything that it touches, correct defenses used aside. As the range says...it has a 15 meter radius.

Segunda Etapa:
Segunda Etapa Release Command: "Báñese en la sangre"
Segunda Etapa Appearance: Upon releasing her rarely seen Segunda Etapa the first thing which happens is her reiatsu explodes and disperses, doing as the command suggest and showers the area around Lastrada in blood. Soon after this blood like reiatsu flows over to and clinks to Lastrada's body which starts the physical changes in Segunda Etapa. The entirely white armor will now be a blood red color. The horns upon her head will grow and become twisted together forming a halo above her head. Lastrada's wings will grow out a bit more and will have what looks to be feathers upon them, giving them a more angelic (or demonic if your view sees it) look to them.

The talons on Lastrada's feet would remain the same, however her claws would gain an odd ability in this form. Lastrada can fuse them together to form a sword lance of sorts at any time she wishes or she could make them back into there simplistic claw form. The spiritual pressure Lastrada gives off in this form is very heavy and thick to the point it might confuse people at first to what they were sensing (Purely cosmetic..they figure out it's spiritual pressure pretty damn fast..). The last few details that change is lack of scales on her body now, replaced by smooth surface (albeit red with blood.) and on the center of her chest going down is a rather large cross that seems to have been burnt on.  Lastrada's mask is also completely blank in this state, not even having a place for her to see out of. She needs not her sight. She simply senses the area around her through touch, sound, smell..

Segunda Etapa Powers: The first power actually seems to be a disadvantage at first. With the lack of eye sight in this form, Lastrada uses her other enhanced senses to fight and move. However, in truth this gives her a much more full encompassing 360 degree vision range. This as a result gets rid of blind spots. The rest of her strengths are simply enhanced from her Primera etapa, most note worthy her brute strength and how anything to do with Arte de la Espada is treated as 2 tiers higher, including basic attacks with her wings, talons and claws which just like in her last form, count as Lastrada's swords.

Segunda Etapa Abilities:

Name: El juicio de Ángel
Type: Offense | Arte de la Espada
Rank: Transcender
Range: 0-40 meters
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 9 post
Description: Lastrada forms her claws together into the sword lance, the tip starting to glow with her reyshie. Rapidly she would start slashing the air in front of her, rather the enemy is in front of her or not and lines appear in the air, marked by Lastrada's strikes. At her command, all these fly forth up to 50 meters away and slice through anything that they touch, reducing them into bloody bits. Lastrada can make up to ten strikes with this attack and she does not need to send them out all at once either. She is free to shoot them off one after another.
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