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on Fri Feb 08, 2013 11:29 pm

I. Personal Information

First Name: Makasu
Last Name: Takenaka
Alias(es): Take
Gender: Male
Age: 146 (Appears to be 19)
Birthday: 8th August
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Reiryoku Colour: Blue

II. Gotei XIII Information

Division: 10th division
Seat: None seated

III. Appearance

Height: 6.2
Weight: 173lbs
Hair: White hair of medium lenght extending to his neck
Eyes: Red
Tattoo/scars: None
General Appearance: Makasu have white hair of average lenght and red narrow and almost evil looking eyes. His body is very tall and stronly built. Despite being 146 years old he still looks like the same young man as he died. He usually wears the official shinigami outfit but prefers wearing his own clothes. His usual clothes consists of a black cloak with white shoulder pads, white lines along the sides and two chains hanging from the belt. The cloaks inside is purely white. He wears black pants and black boots with several leather bands decorated with several rivets. He may also at times wear a red scarf with his shinigami robes.

IV. Personality

Personality: Makasu is the type of guy that tries to keep cool whatever the situation so that he doesn`t make any rash or stupid decisions. Though he acts cool he is actually very friendly and energetic when you get to know him. He is a hard worker and always do his best. He actually tends to lose his composure when he is with friends or a girl he likes. He bears great respect for strong people as he believes they went through great deal of hardship to become strong. Makasu may respect strong people but doesn`t really care about higher ups and will without hesitation disobey orders if he deems them to be utterly ridiculous. He wants to be strong so that he can protect and prove himself strong so that he gains the respect he deserves. He possess a fighting spirit equal to gods and will do his best to prove himself both in battle and in life. He enjoys the heat of battle as he knows that overcoming the opponent will prove his strenght to everyone. Makasu is also a very good leader as he can calmly yet impulsively analyze his opponent and act accordingly. Though Makasu is known for his cool and calculating personality he is actually very protective of his friends. It is also known that because of his cool and calculating personalty its really hard to make him angry, but should one succeed in making him loose his temper he will act purely out of rage and won`t stop his assault until his enemy is completely anhiliated.

Likes: As previously stated he likes battles since its a chance to prove himself. Strong people because he believes they went through a lot of hardship to become strong. He likes to walk around and he is usually seen walking through the Seritei, Rukongai and even in the real world at times, wearing his casual clothes. He also loves to eat since he possess a large amount of spiritual power and thus have to eat. He likes people in general and won`t judge out of abilities or race. He cares strongly for his friends and will do everything in his power to support them. He likes strong willed girls but he doesn`t have a particular love interest for the moment and even if he did he wouldn`t be able to tell her just like that. His favorite food is curry. Though he usually wears the official robes he will wear his casual clothes during freetime.

Dislikes: He mostly dislikes the hollows for the pain and suffering they spread but he`s got a soft spot for arrancars since they`re usually more human than the common hollow. He dislikes beans of every kind. He abolutely hates the thought of his friends getting hurt and in the event of that happening he will lose himself to rage and hatred. Makasu have his own way of judging good and evil and will more than willingly remove what he deems evil. He hates the Quincy since they actually destroy the hollows instead of giving them the second chance they deserve.

Motivations: Makasu knows that he must keep fighting even in his afterlife and will keep going so that he may left something behind during his second chance at life. He feels that there is no limit to how strong he can become and keeps training both his soul and body in the hopes of reaching the best there is. He believes that the Seritei and the shinigami really are important for the safety of both world and would gladly fight to protect it. The feeling of comrades and friends trusting him pushes him to grow even stronger so that they may continue trusting him. Makasu is determined that even the damned soul of a hollow don`t neccesarily have to be evil as some actually don`t fight and instead appears as humanoids with wishes and dreams of their own.

Fears: He fears the fact that he almost transformed once and is afraid that the power of the hollow might follow him on his journey. He fears the thought of losing yet another friend to the onslaught of the hollows and thus he is very protective of his friends. Though he never speaks of it he is afraid of needles, he hates the feeling of it piercing his skin and shooting something in so he will at all cost avoid the shots. Makasu i also afraid of being rejected since it makes him feel so small and unwanted. He is afraid of being left alone.

V. Zanpakutō Spirit Information

Zanpakutō First Name: Shobatsu
Zanpakutō Last Name: No Rensa
Zanpakutō Element: NA
Zanpakutō Type: Kido
Zanpakutō Personality: Unlike his master Shobatsu is extremely lazy and spends most of his freetime sleeping or watching the stars. He is unmotivated against everything and barely lifts a finger for anything. He only cares about his master and ignores all other people. He claims he doesn`t really like fighting but while in battle he becomes a real demon of the battlefield, just like his Master. He is extremely loyal towards his master and will go to great lenghts to ensure his safety.

Zanpakutō Appearance: Shobatsu appears in the form of a young man white long hair and a ruined bandana mith mysterious symbols. He wears a cloak in black and white with similiar symbols and the same symbols are covering his body. His jacket is held together with leather straps at the front and he shows of his chest and stomach. He wears ordinary black pants and shoes with a big chain attached to his left wrist.

VI. Inner world

Inner World Appearance: Makasu`s inner world is an endless beautiful grass plain. It`s always night and you are able to watch countless stars in the sky which represent the possibilities of his soul. The world gets clouded and covers the stars when he is overcome with sadness or despair. Somewhere on the plains there is a large white monolith where you can usually find Shobatsu resting against it.

VII. Zanpakutō Sealed form

Zanpakutō Appearance:

VIII. History

History: Makasu was born into a family consisting of his scientist parents. His parents died later when he was 15 in a lab accident and he had to manage on his own. 4 years later Maksu tricked a criminal organisation on a large amount of money to ensure his fundings. The criminals were furious and hired a hitman to take him out. The hitman found him and he started to run through the alleys but the hitman seemed to almost walk through the walls and eventually caught him. He pulled a gun out and shot him between his eyebrows

Makasu wook up and found himself in the alley with a chain attached to his chest. He travelled aimlessly for about 10 years and gradually started to transform into a hollow. Then a group of shinigami found him sitting next to his own grave with a nearly eroded chain and he had started to develop a mask. The shinigami approached him and had to be very careful as they approached him. He held back his hatred and let them approach uttering only two words "Save me". They sent him on his way to soul society. Makasu lost conciousness during the transfer. When he woke up he found himself on a hill overlooking a town that belonged in the sengoku period.

He stood on the hill and radiated an insane amount of reiatsu. Unable to control his power his reiatsu sent out fluctations destroying several building in Rukongai. The shinigami noticed the overflowing reiatsu and went to the hill. As they arrived the excess power forcefully formed a zanpakuto to keep his power under control. The shinigami watched him as he left with the blade. As he had destroyed so much he thought the shinigami wanted to kill him and so he was on the run for a really long time.

One day he got caught and defeated by a lone shinigami. As he was about to turn him in makasu suddenly heard a voice, a voice that seemed so familiar and yet so new. It reminded him of something but he couldn`t figure out what it was. He saw a plain and a person sitting next to a white monolith of some sort. He walked towards the man and asked who he was. He just kept lying there all quiet, but then he suddenly spoke. "I really like these stars you know. They make me feel at peace somehow". Makasu looked up and saw the many stars in the sky so many and bright but averted his eyes once again to the sitting man. "Who are you?" The man turned his head and spoke "i am the one who gazes at the stars and sadden when they dissappear". Makasu looks puzzled on him and asked "What is your name". He looks at him with a suddenly serious look "I am your power, i am your blade and i will support you so that my stars may stay bright. I am Shobatsu, now take hold of me!" Makasu stares in awe at his new ally and wonders what exactly he is talking about. Then he hears a noise and turns to Shobatsu. "Your questions will have to wait, now if you`l excuse me i`l be taking a nap". He suddenly dozes off and Makasu wakes up in the barracks of the fourth squad.

He is told of what happened and was told the truth about their hunt for him. They believed it was extremely rare to summon a Zanpakuto without being a shinigami or achieve communiction with it. He were also told that his transformation didn't neccesarily have to reoccur. He was offered a place in the academy to learn to control his powers. He kept studying and managed to ace all classes in one year which made the talk go about a genius among the shinigami. The only problem now was to choose which division to join. Since everyone wanted him to join their squad.

Until he could be assigned to division he were sent out with various squads to find one of his liking. Then one day he was sent out with the 10th division to exterminate some abnormal hollows. They suddenly jumped out of the shadows against the captain and Makasu suddenly heard his blade speak once more.
"Lets get him partner". Makasu shouted the words of release "Hirogeru Shobatsu!". The blade transformed into a black gauntlet with strange markings extending to his elbow. He brought it forward and chains flew out of the gauntlet in a straight line against the hollow and the chains impaled it and kept going towards the other hollows killing every single one.

After the incident he was asked by the 10th division captain to join his squad. He agreed and was eventually an official member of the 10th division. He was happy to celebrate with his new friends but he felt soething out of the ordinary, Something was going to happen.

IX. Other

RP sample:
He had obtained a message from a team member saying that they had encountered a powerful in the Rukongain and so Makasu had springed to action and was getting close to the site. He arrived to see about a dozen shinigami lying on the ground. He immediatly started to search for survivors. He checked their pulses one by one and was relieved to see they were alive. He found a concious one sitting against a rock. "Thank god someone came!" . Makasu approached the man and started started to question him. "What exactly happened?". The shinigami took a moment to breath. "It appeared out of the shadows while we were patroling. I didn't get a good look at it... Damn it was just to fast! Next thing i knew we were all on the ground and it were nowhere to be seen". Makasu sent a butterfly to the fourth squad and started to pursue the faint reiatsu left in the area.

There was no doubt about it, it was close. It was hiding somewhere waiting for him to drop his guard. Then suddenly something emerged from the corner and Makasu reacted by landing a powerful kick against the blur and it fell down in front of him. The hollow was snake like with a mask resembling a cobra's head. It made a strange and threatening sound as it lunged at him and he quickly moved out of the way and said "Hirogeru Shobatsu". He let the chains capture the hollow and so it couldn't move.

He watched the captured hollow wondering if he should kill it or spare it for research. But then it suddenly spoke. "I can smell it... You're just like me". Makasu froze in place as the hollow spoke. "I can feel it! Its in there!" . Makasu suddenly remembered the familiar mask which had once covered his face, The mask of the hollow. He approached the captured hollow with hatred in his eyes. He kept hitting the hollow's mask with his gauntlet and kept hitting it until it dispersed in a dark cloud. He sheathed Shobatsu and looked towards the night sky with one thought racing through his mind. "It could feel it... Does that mean its still there!?". As the though crossed his mind Shobatsu spoke to him. "It doesn't really matter now does it? let's just wait and see". Makasu laughed at the comment and said: "You're just to lazy to handle it". Makasu started to walk home as Shobatsu took one of yet many naps to come.

Face claim: Arawn from Tears to tiara

Last edited by Makasu on Sun Feb 10, 2013 12:02 pm; edited 4 times in total (Reason for editing : I put the name in the wrong order)



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on Sat Feb 09, 2013 4:24 am
well done on your app but a few things need to be fixed.

Please make your RP sample a little longer. It is just a little short.

Also please explain Void for your element.

These are the only things keeping me from giving you my approval.


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on Sat Feb 09, 2013 12:31 pm


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on Sat Feb 09, 2013 1:34 pm
1/2 approved. Nothing wrong with the application.

By the way, 6'2 and your weight is 123lb....

Makasu have white hair of average lenght and red narrow and almost evil looking eyes. His body is very tall and stronly built.

You describe your body being strongly built but being 6'2 and 123lb is VEERRYY under weight. You're just a stick with bones haha. 180lb-200lb's is a more realistic lean strong built body mass, if being 6'2

{Then again I might be horribly wrong, correct me if I am wrong. I am just going by experience. Some professional basketball players in the 6'0-6'3 range are around 180lb-210lb, their lean and agile, their body contains lots of muscle.}


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on Sat Feb 09, 2013 1:54 pm



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on Sat Feb 09, 2013 4:03 pm



on Sat Feb 09, 2013 4:53 pm
Wooooah there romeo.

"Void (As in a empty element which covers everything not connected to the ordinary elements)"

This needs to be explained in detail right now if you want it to be an element. Otherwise you're going to have to have it NA on element and app void as a non-elemental release aspect.


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on Sun Feb 10, 2013 12:05 pm
Ok il put it as NA for now and put it in release aspects later, it didn't really matter anyway i just wanted a cooler name than non-elemental.



on Sun Feb 10, 2013 4:27 pm
Alright then. The approval sticks.

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